The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart depicts the average temperatures in each month in London, New York, and Sydney, while the table shows the statistics for average sunshine hours annually in these cities.
From the overall perspective, it is apparent that the total hours of sunshine each year in New York and Sydney are much higher than that of London. When London and New York show increases in temperature in the middle of the year, Sydney observes the opposite pattern.
Looking at the first chart, we can see that the temperature of London increases gradually in the first six months and reaches its peak in July at about 23 degrees. After that, this figure starts to plummet at the end of the year and troughs at the same level as the beginning (roughly 10 degrees). New York sees the same pattern of temperature but this city shows a more erratic fluctuation, ranging from 5 degrees at the beginning and the end to 30 degrees in the middle of the year).
Sydney observes a significant difference because this city starts and ends the year at about 25 degrees. The temperature declines steadily and reaches a trough in July at about 15 degrees making the city have the lowest discrepancy in temperature in a year.
With regards to hours of sunshine, it is obvious that New York and Sydney surpass London by more than half, with 2535, 2473, and 1180 hours respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72268907563 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51966350681 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508403361345 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.920092088 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.888888889 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178477396138 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852860732242 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060709052242 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113771494658 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661107454111 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.