The graph below gives information about daily salt intake in the USA in 2000.
Given is the bar chart depicting the ideal amount of salt consumed by American adults on a daily basis in 2000.
Perceptibly, males adult seemed to aborb a greater deal of salt compared to the r remaining sex. Additionally, the group including people from 20 to 39 years old were hard wired to prefer having salt in their meals rather than other counterparts.
Prominently, the intake of salt among boys under 6 years was recorded at a moderate level- merely 2200 miligrams. However, this figure witnessed a remarkable leap to 3500 miligrams which surpassed the recommended and continued to escalate directly proportional to age when children reached their adolescent time - 12 to 19 years old. Astonishingly, the group of male adults aged 20 to 39 topped first in terms of salt intake with 4500 miligrams heralded. Conversely, American male aged from 40 to 60 and the over 60s tend to mimimize the amount of salt cosumption which both fluctuated some where in the vicinity between 3500 and 4000.
When it comes to the female groups, the under 6 take the least salt with only 1250 miligrams recorded, which was followed by the over-60s with salt intake reached ideal amount. Strikingly, 4 remaining groups shared fairly similar amount of salt intake with arounf 3000 miligrams recorded for each, however, there was still a huge disproportion compared to the male group.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igrams. However, this figure witnessed a remarkable leap to 3500 miligrams which ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roportional to age when children reached their adolescent time - 12 to 19 years o...
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Message: Did you mean 'somewhere'?
Suggestion: somewhere
...f salt cosumption which both fluctuated some where in the vicinity between 3500 and 4000. ...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he under 6 take the least salt with only 1250 miligrams recorded, which was follo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99126637555 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73167031032 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2304573984 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147089932089 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688377525885 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424302626342 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100610221684 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034822125693 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igrams. However, this figure witnessed a remarkable leap to 3500 miligrams which ...
^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roportional to age when children reached their adolescent time - 12 to 19 years o...
^^
Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: SOME_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhere'?
Suggestion: somewhere
...f salt cosumption which both fluctuated some where in the vicinity between 3500 and 4000. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he under 6 take the least salt with only 1250 miligrams recorded, which was follo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99126637555 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73167031032 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2304573984 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147089932089 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688377525885 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424302626342 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100610221684 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034822125693 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.