The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales from 2000 to 2010.
The line diagram provides statistics about the sales of gold in Dubai in the years of 2000-2010. In general, the gold sold in Dubai almost fluctuated annually. Notably, there were wild variations between 2004 and 2006.
The revenue from selling gold stood at 2.5 million of Dirham in 2000. In the following 3 years, this figure approximately stayed unchanged. Not until 2004 did a sudden fall to the lowest point eventuate. Money generated by selling gold made up just over 1.5 million Dirhams. The period of 2004 to 2005 witnessed a prosperous upward trend, which reached a peak of 4 million Dirhams in the end of 2005.
A substantial decrease to 3 million Dirhams in the amount of gold traded was seen 1 year later. During the subsequent period of 2006 to 2010, the turnover from gold sold fluctuated remarkably. Standing at 3.5 million Dirhams in 2010, it was 500 thousand Dirhams more than that at the beginning of this period.
Despite the annual fluctuation, the gold transaction eventually increased by 1 million compared to that of 2000.
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- In the modern world more and more emphasis is being placed on acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from textbooks or other sources Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this trend 84
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problem does it cause What could be done to encourage people to buy local products 78
- Many students now have the opportunity to study in other countries Studying abroad may bring some benefits to some students but it also has a significant number of disadvantages Discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion 89
- The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales from 2000 to 2010 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90449438202 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68943915047 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5479427492 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.75 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233999890229 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907678568946 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106549312375 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15084176718 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853776331326 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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