The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia the UK and other regions

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK and other regions.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian citizens who were given birth in three different countries between 1976 and 2011.

It is clear that while the figure for Asia inclined considerably over a 35-year period, the opposite was true for the UK and other regions. Furthermore, there were small changes in the percentage of Australians who were born outside Australia in total.

In 1976, roughly 3% of the Australian population were delivered in Asia while the respective proportions of Australian residents who were born in the UK and other regions were nearly 14% and 11%. Over the following 10 years, the figure for Asia increased by approximately 3%, but those for both the UK and other regions dropped by about 4%. By 2011, the figure for the UK had declined to only 5% while those for Asia and other regions had risen to 15% and about 13% respectively.

Looking at the total percentage, more than 22% of people living in Australia were given birth out of Australia in1976. From 1976 to 2001, there was a slight drop of only 3% in this figure. However, a dramatic increase was seen between 2006 and 2001 with the total percentage of Australians being born outside reaching its peak of 25%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86538461538 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65800607632 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548076923077 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5312895744 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.444444444 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365646172904 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143138824032 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837476053769 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197467092144 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773969955586 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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