Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is true that many international sporting events have been held in several big countries nowadays. While I understand the reasons why some people think it is harmful, I still believed this would be beneficial to the host nations in some aspects.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why people think that these events have positive impacts on host countries. Firstly, they could increase valuable tourism in the host cities. By hosting such events, those countries could attract hundreds of visitors, which can boost local economies. Another point worth mentioning is creating a sense of national pride for the nations participating. Appearing to rank high in these sport-related contests, those countries have opportunities to be on many well-known newspapers and national TV broadcasts such as New York Times, BBC and ABC. In addition, these sports events bring thousands of jobs for local communities.
On the other hand, some argue that running sports events bring negative factors. One such drawback is that those events are a financial drain on host cities. For example, a January 2021 study found that losing foreign travelers due to COVID-19 restrictions cost Japan $23 billion, which are much higher than predicted. Finally, those expensive infrastructure and buildings fall into disuse beyond these sporting competitions. For instance, Bejing’s 2008 Bird’s Nest Olympic Stadium costs the government $11 million annually to maintain. As a result, it would waste money and end up in a financial crisis if it could not be sold to any private owners.
In conclusion, it seems to me that sporting events do more harm than good since they become a financial burden for host cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24908424908 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7849140176 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2494444397 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272916673511 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834618742143 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725907407379 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176421335004 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840345457924 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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