The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.
The graph shows the percentage of preferences of two groups of boys and girls in Australia in leisure activities.
Overall, it can be seen that watching tv or videos has the highest proportion in which is preferred in both groups, while the figure for skateboarding or rollerblading has the opposite tendency.
All boys and girls of the 5-14 age group in Australia are fascinated by watching tv or videos. Moreover, electronic or computer games are much more preferred by boys than girls. The figure for boys is over 80% which is 20% higher than for girls. Likewise, bike riding also attracts boys more than girls. Boys’ involvement in this activity is nearly 80%, whereas the proportion of girls is almost 60%.
The percentage of boys between 5 and 14 years old who enjoy skateboarding or rollerblading are 40% which almost doubles the figure for girls, at slightly more than 20%. On the other hand, the figure for girls spending their free time on art and crafts is much higher than their male counterparts, at just under 60% and approximately 40% respectively.
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...ls in Australia in leisure activities. Overall, it can be seen that watching tv...
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...llerblading has the opposite tendency. All boys and girls of the 5-14 age group...
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...the proportion of girls is almost 60%. The percentage of boys between 5 and 14 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, moreover, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91712707182 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83435645406 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1397143611 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0624199032487 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344159247563 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522484954842 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602964110948 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642930645189 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.