Criminality is growing among children and teenagers. Why is it growing and how should these criminals be treated?
Juvenile delinquency has risen dramatically in many nations, which is understandable. In addition, there are several reasons that have strongly contributed to this alarming issue. According to this worrying situation , a number of possible punishment for youth crime preventations are provided for personal and societal safety.
To start with , the growth of crime among juvenile comes from numerous reasons. One of the most obvious factor is the impact of social media. In recent days, immature teenagers are bombarded with sensitive informations via televisions, Internet, Google such as violence, sexual harassment, drugs. Due to their impressionable minds , it is quite easy for them to get influenced to what they watched and commit crimes without fully understanding the consequences for what they did. Moreover, family background plays an essential role in this issue. Several families in this contemporary society have adults who are usually craving for work. They tend to have less time to care for their children. As a result, these kids may need to find other sources of care which leading directly to more chance of meeting crime.
After realizing an alarming situation of juvenile crimes , the right punishment which is given by the government is definitely crucial and necessary. Eventhough teenagers are criminal , they should not be treated like adults. There should be mercy for them to redeem themselves. Firstly, offenders should be forced to participate in community service or psychological course at school. If teenagers show changes in attitude, the length of punishments maybe considered to expire. As for more serious crimes such as being a killer , sexual crimes , they must be sentenced to life imprisonment. This strategy not only ensures a safe environment for citizens, but also creates a highly disciplined environment where misbehaving children can be educated.
In conclusion , the reasons which lead young people to criminal life not only come from family backgrounds , influence of social media but also come from other aspects such as education , society ,etc. The only way to control and ease teenage crimes down is to enforce strict laws that make teenagers think twice before breaking the law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, as for, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41498559078 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91634441913 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625360230548 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.260472075 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.95 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144660339063 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045981789185 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714679622659 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796201483187 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737941493563 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.