Criminality is growing among children and teenagers. Why is it growing and how should These criminals be treated
Children mind are like sponge, thus they can easily catch up everything around them. Currently, crime ration escalate among child and undergraduate. There are several reasons for such situation which is explaining in the ensuring paragraph with some preventive action against juvenile offender.
Discussing the reason of teenager criminality, the foremost cause is lack of primary education. If individual cannot get educated then they does not aware about law and order against crime and try to misdeed. For example,as per last survey through Indian government, 70% juvenile offender is not educated and not aware of laws. Furthermore, teenagers are easily to convenience to do misdeed by giving temptation about the money. Nowadays juvenile does crime because toearn easy money through shortcut like chain snatcher and pocket snatcher.
In addition, discussing preventive measure to overcome juvenile crime. Government should start free education for child criminal thus they get knowledge and develop them self. If teen are educated then they don’t need to take shortcut to earn money which leads to reduce child criminal rate. Furthermore, government should give special attention to child, who is left by parents; authority should give military training and give proper guild-lines about career development. Forexample, Indian government start mission to educate criminal on prison, namely “Siksha on Jail”.
To conclude, In this developing world , juvenile more intend towards crime because of the lack of education and temptation of money, which can be mitigate through provide education to child criminal in juvenile jail and give guidelines for betterment of their carrier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, thus, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68897637795 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72142170593 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0010203978 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108580297224 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382831023565 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334589060922 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642603146299 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344038456511 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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