The graph below gives information on wages of Somecountry over a ten-year period.

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The graph below gives information on wages of Somecountry over a ten-year period.

The below line graph illustrates growth rate of wages in percentage for ten year period i.e., from 1993 to 2003 in one country.

In 1993 percentage growth in wage was at two percent. In next year i got doubled and reached four percent. there was slight decreas in percentage for the year 1995 and reached to three percent. For next three years it was increased at reached it's maximum value of 6% in 1998. But for next year it got receeded drastically and came to three percent again. After that it decreased continously for next three years. By the end of 2002 it registered its lowest value of 1%. again the percentage slighty crawled up and finished around 2%.

To recapitulate, overall there is no complete increase or decrease in the growth in the wage percentage. there was a considerable increase of around three percent in between 1996 and1998 and also a significant decrease of three percent in one year from 1998 to 1999. By the end of 2003 growth in wage percentage was two percent which is the same value at the 1993.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...percent in between 1996 and1998 and also a significant decrease of three percent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63586956522 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54607239505 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2550598959 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0833333333 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142531232691 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601794865189 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775714303179 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147507938252 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111794752328 0.0819641961636 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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