The graph below show the average monthly temperatures per year in three major cities.
The given graph illustrates the average monthly temperatures in three different cities across the three different countries.
A perusal of the data indicates that Dubai is the scorching city while Paris is the cold city and Sydney has the moderate weather.
While both cities are hot, temperature in Dubai plummets to 20 degree Celsius while it is little bit higher in Sydney. Temperature gradually increases as summer approaches it reaches a maximum of 35 degree Celsius in Dubai in July but in Sydney, it dwindles to below 15 degree Celsius in the same month. On the other hand, Paris is in different weather zone and highest temperature is 20 degree Celsius in July.
Both Dubai and Paris start to cool off during the winter. However, certain changes can be seen at the end of the year in Sydney with temperature raises to around 22 degree Celsius. Moreover, the temperature in Dubai and Paris remain same at the start and end of the year with 20 degree Celsius and 5 degree Celsius.
To sum up, while Paris remains cold throughout the year while Dubai face warm weather and Sydney on contrast has mostly balanced climate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ummets to 20 degree Celsius while it is little bit higher in Sydney. Temperature gradually...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83505154639 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50041977558 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.130549483 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154499910288 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738669586715 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824299590496 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989114123752 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999592980692 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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