It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for music and sport. And others are not. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas and give your opinion.
It is commonly believed that few people blessed with the hidden talents like singing, dancing and sport. However, sometimes it is agreed that if a proper training has given to anyone, it can be fruitful to become an excellent musician or sports person. In my opinion, it certainly makes sense that those people who born with these enormous talents become more successful in their lives.
On the one side, a person who identifies or realize their certain skills and choose that talent as his/her career will live an exquisite life. Moreover, it will also increase an interest and enthusiasm to work and will get command in that field. For example, A famous footballer Cristiano Ronaldo, which has the great reputation and huge fan following in the world because his father knew and had to find out his passion at the age of 5 years.
On the flip side, a proper guidance and training will definitely lift a child to a respective level and will make them as an extravagant. A child adopts these things quickly at their starting age. For example, World-renowned wicket keeper batsmen M.S Dhoni, who used to be a goalkeeper during his school days but when his coach worked hard on his wicket-keeping skills and gave him hard practice session, he is now one of the tremendous batsmen as well as the best captain of the world.
In conclusion, both side ideas have their merits but I strongly believe that people with such talents do not have any kind of fear, stress or nervousness in his/her life. They adopt these things in their lives will become successful and certainly will lead to a better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75179856115 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52666797038 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1015070714 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.090909091 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210411183733 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824301691342 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724783224797 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136024356596 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10698236163 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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