In many countries of the world, space for additional horizontal has run out and people are beginning in multi storied apartment buildings. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in high rise building and state in your own opinion. Where you would prefer to live in.
Nowadays, the trend of living in bungalows have been dying out and people are giving preference to the buildings. It is amicable to me that living in the multi-storied is affordable for everyone which is a major advantage but it surely reduce our privacy is a primary disadvantage.
To embark with an optimistic side, these buildings are cheaper in cost and it is suitable for a middle-class person to buy it because these apartments have shorter space and also it would be around 10 to 15 flats in a specific section of the multi-storied tower. Furthermore, you also get plenty of facilities like extra car parking, gymnasium, sports ground, grocery shop etc. Another big factor is the security reason. For example, there are many CCTV cameras placed at every corner of these building and the height of these apartments are too high that is impossible to jump and enter in it.
On the paradoxical side, the main drawback is the lack of privacy as in these buildings. Generally, there would be a party or any meeting held in every day so the sound of the music and chaos of people certainly ruins other freedom. In addition, another corn is the excess of fresh air in these kinds of homes. As a result, people become suffocated due to lack of ventilation and less space. Moreover, it would also be a nightmare for those members which would be live on the top floor. For example, the technical problem of an elevator causes a lot of difficulties for these people, especially for the older person.
To recapitulate, it is a desire of everybody to live an exquisite lifestyle. As per my observation, I believe that if you have a lucrative job and your earning is good, you should live in the bungalow or in a townhouse where you can get tremendous benefits and enjoy your life happily and peacefully.
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Suggestion: reduces
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enjoy your life happily and peacefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70569620253 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79619902184 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1163242761 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225857752432 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064174534745 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457959029104 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133590659045 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318733532526 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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