The graph below show the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus and train between 1970 and 2023
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph illustrates how many people communing daily by 3 different kinds of transport were and will be in the United Kingdom between 1970 and estimations until 2030
What stands out from the line graph is that while the number of car and train users winessed upward trends over the given period while/ whereas that for bus experienced a decline. Besides, the rate of car travelers are always the highest.
Starting at the highest point in 1970 with more than 5 million before, Car commuters saw a fluctuation and then it is predicted that this figure will surge to nearly a half in 2030. Bus goers ranked second in 1970 with around 4 millions but after some continuous fall until the period of prediction it becomes the least favorite means of transport to the British with roughly 3 millions.
With a reference to train users in the UK, Being the last out of the three means of transport suggested in in 1970 which was around 2 millions, according to current predictions, will be experienced a considerable growth until overtaking bus commuters to roughly 4.5 millions and get the second place at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75252525253 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57277010351 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.726319904 43.030603864 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.2 112.824112599 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6 22.9334400587 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158269944448 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855683143726 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.018067742618 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932785787745 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022529610154 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.