The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates the average amount of CO2 gasses are produced by a person in 4 countries over 40 years.
From a simple recognition to the provided information, it is apparent people in the united kingdom had produced the highest CO2 emissions over a period of time. Portugal's population produced the least amount of carbon dioxide until 2007.
In 1967, a person in united kingdom used to produce 11 metric tonnes of carbon dioxide gas in the air and Sweden people were in the second grade by producing 8 metric tonnes per person. Nevertheless, a person who lived in italy produced approximately 5 metric tonnes CO2, also Portugal's population produced a mere less than 2 metric tonnes which was the lowest amount in the same year.
In 1977, Sweden's CO2 production by a person rose dramatically to 11 metric tonnes which was similar to the carbon dioxide of a person in united kingdom. it is considerable, while, between 1977 to 2007, united kingdom and Sweden's CO2 emissions which produced per person declined sharply, CO2 gasses per person in italy and Portugal population produced more than 5 metric tonnes until 1997 and after that both countries rose slightly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...oduced the highest CO2 emissions over a period of time. Portugals population produced the leas...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... dioxide of a person in united kingdom. it is considerable, while, between 1977 to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, nevertheless, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69854397363 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9401061605 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.571428571 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249850852649 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141984904623 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539594756865 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165824904981 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545669948044 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.