The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members of this health club.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart demonstrates the number of people using health clubs in Miami and Florida in 2017 while the pie charts give information about various age groups of the two sexes.
Overall, as can be seen from the first chart, the popularity of health club memberships experienced some major shifts; simultaneously, it is clear that men engaged in this service more than women did. Meanwhile, in the latter charts, youngsters made the most significant contribution.
The figures of male participants in clubs specializing in health were almost 600 in January. Then, they dropped by 50 a month later and underwent a steady upward trend for those next five months. After that, the numbers gradually decreased, reaching above 600 at the end of the period. In the meantime, in the first two months, the number of women involved in the service plateaued at 500. Subsequently, for the next consecutive seven months, they experienced positive growth. The ratio went down in October, rose by roughly 20 a month later, and nosedived by circa 100 in December.
In the pie charts, it is clear that people from 21-45 years old participated in health club the most as they made up more than half of the charts. The numbers of old people’s memberships of male and female were 25% and 31% respectively. On the other hand, other groups of age only took up one-fifth of the chart in the male section while in the female one, they accounted for less than 1% compared to their male counterparts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88537549407 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75551624069 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5814962854 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211722353797 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686018064578 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815255802963 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143880457947 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085132424963 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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