The provided graph represents the typical use of a health club per month in Miami, Florida. Meanwhile, the pie charts depict the ratio of membership differenciated by gender and age.
During the last year, the highest number of males was counted in June, reaching almost 850 people. By contrast, the lowest utilize of a health club by men was estimated to be slightly under 550 users in February. According to the first pie chart, more than a half of male members were in age group of 21-45. Furthermore, precisely a quarter were seniors, whereas others amounted to 20%.
From all group, unconsiderable more than a half of membership were registered by yound and middle aged women similarly.However, compared with males, approximately a third of females were older than 65 years. Considering their monthly use of this facility, nearly equal number of women attended club during the wintertime, which was accounted for 500. In warmer season, visiting rose, especially by the end of summer. The total number of full-time visitors was unsignificantly under 750.
Overall, a health club had considerably mone male membership than male, likewise, higher attendance was from men. On the whole statistics, more people of both sexes prfer to go to club in summer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...y yound and middle aged women similarly.However, compared with males, approximately a t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, third, whereas, while, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11165048544 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94743354494 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2636067617 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249248844107 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835185549356 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691564468642 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157428682824 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723821634878 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.