The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full time members over last year The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members

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The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members over last year. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members.

The graph gives information about the average monthly use of a health club by all full-time members in two different cities over last year.

It can be seen from the bar chart that health club use for both males and females has an upward trend from January till June. Whereas, from June to September a uniform trend (neither additive nor decreasing) has been shown for both sexes, By contrast, from September to December is observed a downward trend. 550 Men used of health club in January, the number of men who used health club reached a peak of about 850 in July, and finally is decreased to arou...

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