The graph below shows the average montly salary and the prices of white television.
The bar graph demonstrate the people who participate in drama, painting, sculpture and language according to gender while pie chart provide information about population according to age group.
Overall, what stand out from the graph is that while the popularity of language activities grew over the period in question, and that painting participant remainly high throughput the number of drama intrusted in fell sharply. Old people figure, mean while saw an increase and adult followed by drop.
With regard to drama and language, the women figure were roughly identical at 10 and 20 participants respectively. However, whereas men climbed to reach at 20 in drama before levelling off for the remainder of the period, the sclupture peaked at 10 men and women drop the 5 in the figure.
Turning to the generation, population stayed consistent with old generation figure remaining between 42 percent throughout the period as popularity was nearly as high as children in the first half of decade studied, with number of population rising from 5 percent to 42 percent, but time to time saw under 20 number crash to adult number, a figure which had not changed by last year and slightly increased children population.
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- Some people think studying from the past offers no benefits to today s life while others believe that history is a valuable source of information for us Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Today, some food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only eat locally produced food. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: meanwhile
...ted in fell sharply. Old people figure, mean while saw an increase and adult followed by d...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, whereas, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14141414141 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78121000078 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.596131767 43.030603864 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.666666667 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0215284820496 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0119337812158 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0168769152457 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0161323686214 0.15604864568 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163250454752 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 61.2550243902 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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