Some people think studying from the past offers no benefits to today's life, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information for us. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In the modern age learning or teaching has been a heated topic constantly. Some people think it is a valuable source of information while others say that it is a wastage of time. Presenting my view I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in the following paragraphs.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that in the schools or colleges study become more difficult and study of history is a extra burdon on the students. Subsequent factor could be that knowledge of war's is knowed by the history and youthful generation are more likely to be behave like obstinate. Obviously a motive could be that study of science is more valuable as compared to the history. For instance, the recent survey findings have clearly indicated that study of history is a nonvaluable part of educational it does never related to the technology.
However, a number of definite actions could be take to matigate of study of history is provide the knowledge about our culture and tradition and in which family to belong our grand parents.The most successful way to confront this could be to it is best way to provide knowledge to the generation to generation. The favourable fact could be that our religion book also a history book it's also written by our gurus. Such as, Guru Granth Sahib g is a sacred book which relates to the Sikh religion. It is also a history book.
To conclusion, although there are good reason study of history is a nonvaluable source of education. But in opinion study of history must be provided in the college by the teacher's. Otherwise our culture will be died.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75627240143 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75028363468 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534050179211 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.954403981 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172909075422 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701294426136 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788843062718 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121658501108 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625218414643 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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