The graph show below the air conditioning unit sales in two different countries over amounts between April 2010 and October 2010.
The bar graph highlight the number of air conditioning unit were sold in Australia and Uk over a seven months period from April to October 2010.
Overall, what stand out graph is that in general, while Australia AC sales witnessed a decline before rising after July, the number of AC unit sold in the month of may these two countries purchased an equal number of air conditioning units.
With regarding to the sales of AC in UK month of April was collape up. about 45 thousands. In the month of June sales were surprisingly changed. Furthermore, April and September was remainly constant and in last months
sales were go down.
Turning to, Australia were country which sold the maximum AC in month of April it was near about 3 thousand sale. Afterward four months slightly decline. Additionally in July sales reached at least the 1000. Next in August it cross the 3 thousand remarkably changed in the sales. Finally then, in October sales were reached at the top level at 5 thousand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...AC in UK month of April was collape up. After that in the next month sale who which r...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...onstant and in last months sales were go down. Turning to, Australia were count...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...Afterward four months slightly decline. Additionally in July sales reached at least the 1000...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'crosses'?
Suggestion: crosses
...ed at least the 1000. Next in August it cross the 3 thousand remarkably changed in th...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ousand remarkably changed in the sales. Finally then, in October sales were reached at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, may, regarding, so, then, while, at least, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72307692308 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52271208536 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54358974359 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6170652503 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221382692616 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773703444949 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847582420793 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141566516191 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943974429955 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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