The graph below shows carbon dioxide emissions per capita in four countries from 1975 to 2010
The line graph compares four different areas regarding metric tonnes of carbon dioxide that a person released during a period of 35 years, commencing from 1975
In general, there was an upward tendency in the amount of CO2 emitted in China, Thailand and Vietnam, while the opposite was true to Singapore. In addition, Singapore predominated as the country has the highest level of CO2 during the period shown and Vietnam remained the lowest figure over the same period.
Although sharing the same starting point at 0.5 in 1975, Vietnam stabilized over the first 20 years before increasing marginally to approximately 2 in the final year, while Thailand experienced a considerable rise by 4 at the end of the period. Similarly, the period between 1975 and 2010 witnessed a significant growth from 1.2 in the initial year to 5.8 in 2010, with a slight decrease at nearly the end of the period.
On the other hand, a more volatile pattern was observed in Singapore's carbon dioxide production. Beginning at 11 in 1975, the level of CO2 released by Singapore fluctuated dramatically and reached a peak at 15 in 1975. Thereafter, it plummeted by half in 2005 before reclaiming back to its starting point in the last year
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, similarly, so, while, in addition, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91262135922 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79146052482 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6713018593 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.571428571 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 5.23603664747 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169856551378 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737375147106 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548460185432 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110003821312 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761778649211 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.