The graph below shows concerns three production in forest industry in a European country. The production is timber, pulp and paper during the years between 1980 to 2000

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The graph below shows concerns three production in forest industry in a European country. The production is timber, pulp and paper during the years between 1980 to 2000

The line graph compares the amount of forest industry in a european country with three production over the 20 years period.

It is clear that the total production in forest industry increased considerably in a european country between 1980 and 2000. Overall, the amount of timber produced in this country was higher in 1885 and 1995, but the figure for pulp was higher in the remained stage.

5 million tones of pulp was produced in 1980, while the amount of paper and timber produced stood at the same level at 4 million tones. In 1990, the european country saw the amount of timber production increased sharply to 10 million tones. In addition, the figure for pulp and paper produced were rose slowly to the same position at 7 million tones.

In 2000, the amount of timber produced fell rapidly to 6.5 million tones. In contract, the figure for pulp increased to 9 million tones. The amount of paper produced remained unchanged, before increasing slowly at 8 million tones.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he same position at 7 million tones. In 2000, the amount of timber produced fel...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uced fell rapidly to 6.5 million tones. In contract, the figure for pulp increased...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42961433023 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5492745905 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250602287145 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129577076384 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108103419866 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186768284288 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864660442159 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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