The graph below shows the consumption of 3spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The line chart indicates the consumption of three spreads (margarine, low fats and butter) over a twenty six- year period, starting in 1981.
Overall, it can be seen that the amount of margarine and butter which were consumed increased, whereas the consumption of low fats decrease decreased over the period shown.
Looking at the margarine data set in more detail, it can be seen that the this consumption stood at 82 grams in 1981. this number declined to 80 grams in 1986, and then this number grew exponentially to 100 grams in 1996, By 2007 it had dropped to 40 grams in 2007.
Turning to the remaining in to data set, it is evident that the consumption of butter rose from 140 grams in 1981 to 160 grams in 1986 ,which was the highest point on the chart. this number decreased steadily to 55 grams in 2007.
Finally, The amount of lowest fats which was consumed increased from 10 grams in 1996 to 88 grams in 2001 , and after this number fell slightly to 72 grams at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-six
...s margarine, low fats and butter over a twenty six- year period, starting in 1981. Ov...
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Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...set in more detail, it can be seen that the this consumption stood at 82 grams in 1981. ...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... consumption stood at 82 grams in 1981. this number declined to 80 grams in 1986, an...
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Line 13, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m 140 grams in 1981 to 160 grams in 1986 ,which was the highest point on the chart...
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Line 13, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ich was the highest point on the chart. this number decreased steadily to 55 grams i...
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Line 17, column 21, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the lowest'.
Suggestion: of the lowest
...grams in 2007. Finally, The amount of lowest fats which was consumed increased from ...
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Line 17, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rom 10 grams in 1996 to 88 grams in 2001 , and after this number fell slightly to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56593406593 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38650840717 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3855000235 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138518142255 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757338950557 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312671723258 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842132188802 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427837216912 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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