The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The given line graph indicates the figure of fish and various categories from meats in a European nation over the period of 25 years from 1979 to 2007.

As can be seen from the graph, it is clearly evident that the amount of food used a week as beef, lamp and fish witnessed a downward trend with the exception of chicken over the time frame. So, chicken is being the most favored food.
In 1979, the quantity of chicken was just under 150 grams. This number rose exponentially overtake lamp in 1950 ad beef in 1989. It continued to increase, so for the rest of the period, chicken consumed roughly 50 grams.

By contrast, the other kinds of meats and fish had a reduction. In 1997, beef was the most favored made up 215 grams. The following 7 years saw a fluctuation before plunging by around 110 grams. A similar trend could be seen in the figure of lamp, as it stood at 150 grams in 1979, and during the period it fell sharply. In 2004, lamp accounted for one third of its amount in 1997 equivalent to 50 grams. Besides, the number of fish also decreased, but much less significantly. Fish managed to decline to under 50 grams in 2004.

Looking at the graph, it’s no hard to fish was the least popular during the during the time scale.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...amp and fish witnessed a downward trend with the exception of chicken over the time frame. So, chicke...
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Line 8, column 71, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'during the'.
Suggestion: during the
...s no hard to fish was the least popular during the during the time scale.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46956521739 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33757827927 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3338112076 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4285714286 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171620372319 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579662582284 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623303986311 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093903872584 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575069463842 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 61.2550243902 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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