The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line graph illustrated the average consumption of fish and three kinds of meat in European countries over a period of 25 years.
Overall, the amount of fish consumed in Europe remained at the lowest point between 1979 and 2004. The quantity of chicken was eaten expected to see an upward trend, while the figure of beef, lamb, and fish decreased over that time.
At the beginning, in 1979, around 220 grams were beef is eaten which are used by a person per week, compared to over 150 grams of lamb, 140 grams of chicken and approximate 60 grams for fish consumption. The amount of fish which was eaten followed a similar pattern to beef and lamb with a drop of roughly 35 grams from 1979 to 1981. By contrast, chicken consumption rose dramatically to nearly 170 grams, followed by a downturn.
Looking into the future, there was a gradual decrease in the amount of fish consumed, reaching the lowest point at just under 50 grams per person per week in 2004. By 2004, around 250 grams of chicken was used in Europe, the highest point of all the period. In contrast, the figures for beef and lamp consumed were 100 grams and over 50 grams respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Follow
...170 grams, followed by a downturn. follow into the future, there was a gradual de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57847533632 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39931686739 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515695067265 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4551267944 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185117367977 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948125330234 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101235844972 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15292794921 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101958391563 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.