The line graph illustrates the amount of three spread(margarine, low fat and reduced spreads and butter) which were consumed between the year 1981 til 2007.
Overall, the consumption of butter dropped down while low fat and reduced spreads gradually rise up before its popularity started to decline gradually. Out of all the categories, margarine seem to experience the least regarding to their trend.
In 1981, butter is the spread which was consumed the most, starting out at around 140 grams. Afterward, it reached its peak at over 160 grams before falling down to about 50 grams in 2007
In the final years, low fat and reduced spread became the most widely spread , sitting at 70 grams and used to gain many attention when it first came out in 1996 with the amount increased steadily reaching over 81% in 2001. For the last category, margarine's consumption is very steady from 1981 to 1996, never crossed above 100 grams but it trend started to dropped down by 60 grams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ced spread became the most widely spread , sitting at 70 grams and used to gain ma...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun attention seems to be countable; consider using: 'many attentions'.
Suggestion: many attentions
... , sitting at 70 grams and used to gain many attention when it first came out in 1996 with the...
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Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
...6, never crossed above 100 grams but it trend started to dropped down by 60 grams
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88622754491 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49929128276 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8318871881 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127618925426 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672597072731 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457227156882 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860125189837 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407014358855 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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