1.The bar chart provides information about the percentage of investments to agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services to the UK in last century.
Overall, the contribution of agriculture and manufacturing to the UK economy declined, while business and financial services experienced an upward trend. Although business and financial sector had a lower rate, it outraced both two services at the end of the period.
In 1900 Agriculture and Manufacturing sectors were considerably high at 49% and 45% respectively whereas, business and financial services was the mirror contributor of the period. Although the percentage of Agriculture reached a peak of 52% in 1950, there is a significant drop of this sector. IA stopped at approximately 2% in the last of twentieth century. Likewise, the rates of contribution of manufacturing was gradually decreased over 30%. However, business and financial services developed rapidly and increased throughout the period in comparison with that of the other two.
In Summary, the Agriculture and Manufacturing sector has significantly more contribution than business and financial sector during one century to the UK economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, so, whereas, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70056497175 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39821937515 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6211839119 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290129559981 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125072903659 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063424251528 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198757224269 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247019663143 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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