The line graph compares the electricity consumption during summer and winter for 24 hours in the period in thousand units while the pie chart shows what the electricity is mostly used for in percentages.
To begin with, it can be clearly seen that both in summer and winter, there is a similar fluctuation between 0 hours to 12 hours approximately from under 20000 to 20000 and nearly 35000 to 40000, respectively. After midday in winter, it remained constant and in summer it showed a gentle decline and reached the same level at 21 at which winter consumption peaked at almost 50000 units and for both seasons they drop slightly around 10.
To continue with, when it comes to the pie chart, there are four categories listed for the reason of usage of electricity. Half of the demand is heating rooms and water followed by other household items which are almost equal. However, ovens and kettles, washing are the second highest slice in the chart.
Finally, the consumption in winter outweighs summer, nonetheless, there are similarities during the same hours. Moreover, heating is the main factor for the high demand for electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, while, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99476439791 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65080762488 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602094240838 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0838564061 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294761365898 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11374253191 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111951230916 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186365895002 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124284382668 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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