The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words
The line chart illustrates the differences in the number of wheat exports of three areas, Australia, Canada, and the European Community, from 1985 to 1990.
Overall, the wheat exports of the European Community experienced an upward trend while those of Australia went downwards throughout the timeframe. To begin, European Community ranked second in 1985 of three areas with about 17 million tonnes of wheat, then reached the bottom in the next year with a little fewer than 15 million tonnes, followed by a slight increase until 1988, preceding a sudden rise to more than 20 million. in 1990. On the other hand, while Australia’s exported wheat peaked in the same year as its European counterpart’s, it gradually decreased till the end of the timeframe, standing at a little more than 10 million tonnes.
Canada’s exported wheat experienced sharp fluctuations over the five-year period. It declined in the first year, then rose suddenly to 25 million tonnes in 1988, followed by a deep decrease by approximately 10 million, succeeded by a significant increase by nearly 5 million tonnes. Whilst Canada ranked first in the beginning, the top position was overtaken by European in the end, leaving the former in second place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... a sudden rise to more than 20 million. in 1990. On the other hand, while Australi...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'Canadas'.
Suggestion: Canadas
... a little more than 10 million tonnes. Canada’s exported wheat experienced sharp fluctu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.175 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86425819367 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7494975868 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.857142857 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100777394505 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499514773415 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048041656054 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843127469283 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041332594466 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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