The bar chart illustrates changes in female unemployment rates in the four countries namely, England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland of the UK in 2013 and 2014.
Overall, female unemployment rate was the highest in Scotland and the lowest in Northern Ireland in 2014. Whereas, it was the highest in England and lowest in Wales in 2013.
In 2013 there were 6.8% female job seekers in England which declined a little to 6.5% in 2014. Wales also saw a decrease in female unemployment rate from 5.4% to 5% between 2013 and 2014. In Northern Ireland the similar trend has been seen as female unemployment rate fell from 5.6% to 4.6%, showing almost 1% of decrease.
In contrast, Scotland has seen a rise in female unemployment rate from 6.1% to 6.7% in 2013 and 2014, respectively. Even though it was a small increase, it makes Scotland the highest in regards to the number of female job seekers among England, Wales and Northern Ireland.
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 69
- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005. 56
- The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 183, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...increase, it makes Scotland the highest in regards to the number of female job seekers among ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85802469136 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60748953528 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6363615955 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237289695307 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133006441838 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561470709966 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170080826099 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375859556549 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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