The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph depicts the percentages of unemployment female in 4 countries of United Kingdom (England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland) in year of 2013 and 2014.
Overall, It can be clearly seen that, England has the highest rate of unemployment of female as 6.8%, whereas Wales has the lowest rate of female unemployment as 5.4% in year of 2013. However, In 2014, Scotland has the highest percentages of female unemployment as 6.7% and Northern Ireland has the lowest percentages of female unemployment as 4.6%.
As is presented, the ratio of unemployment has decreased in three countries, whereas the ratio has increased in one country. In England and Wales, the ratio of unemployment was slightly decreased by 0.3% from 6.8 to 6.5 and by 0.4% from 5.4 to 5.0 in year of 2013 to 2014 respectively.
Although, In Northern Ireland, the ratio of unemployment was decreased by 1% from 5.6 to 4.6 from 2013 to 2014. In contrast, the ratio of unemployment of female in Scotland has increased by 0.6% from 6.1 to 6.7 in year of 2013 to 2014.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93930368843 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416666666667 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6999960295 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.142857143 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236133354499 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139234174015 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693594397431 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173539295797 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687913131435 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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