The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares four different countries in term of the accommodation of overseas students over a period of 18 years in Australia.
It is clear that Indonesia had the highest number of students study abroad. However, the number of students in four countries increased considerably over the years.
The number of Singaporeans coming to Australia for study increased gradually from 0 in 1982 to about 10,000 in 1995 before a significant climb to approximately 20,000 in 2000. Similarly, the figure of Hong Kong stayed as same as Singapore until 1987, followed by a sharp rise to nearly 18,000 at the end of the period.
In comparison, after a sharp rise from 5,000 in the first year to about 8,000 students in 1983, the number of students in Malaysia stayed unchanged until 1984, then reaching a peak of almost 18,000 in 1997 before went down at 17,000 in 2000. The number of Indonesian students increased moderately from 0 to 10,000 in a period of 12 years starting from 1982, followed by a sharp rose to about 26,000 in 1998 then dropped suddenly in the next year before climbed to 22,000 students at the end of the period.
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island according to a survey of visitors 79
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the end of the period. In comparison, after a sharp rise from 5,000 in the fir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, similarly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80203045685 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68927284036 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51269035533 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3041846188 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108220709213 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724310731157 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708300869272 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100206488923 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766163975227 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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