The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five-year period. write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below. write at least 150 words.
<span style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68); font-family: "Open Sans", "Helvetica Neue", sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal;">The chart illustrates the expenses for five leisure purposes in Asia, Europe and United States from 1995 to 2000.</span><br style="box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(68, 68, 68); font-family: "Open Sans", "Helvetica Neue", sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68); font-family: "Open Sans", "Helvetica Neue", sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal;">It is clear that there was an increase in total expense for recreation in all three areas over the period of 5 years. Also United States always topped the chart while Asia remained to be the third in ranking of entertainment expenditure over the mentioned period.</span><br style="box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(68, 68, 68); font-family: "Open Sans", "Helvetica Neue", sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68); font-family: "Open Sans", "Helvetica Neue", sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal;">In 1995, total expenditures on recreation of United States was 184 billion dollars, nearly as triple as that of Asia, which was only 67 billion, while the equivalent figure for Europe was 97 billion dollars. In all three locations, people spent most of their money on books and other publishing products, with around 80 billion dollars in United States and under 50 billion in the remaining continents. Following that was the expense on television, which were approximately 50 billion, 30 billion and 20 billion dollars for United States, Europe and Asia respectively. Spending on cinema shape a tiny fraction in all three areas.</span><br style="box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(68, 68, 68); font-family: "Open Sans", "Helvetica Neue", sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68); font-family: "Open Sans", "Helvetica Neue", sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal;">In 2000, United States saw a dramatic increase in total expense for leisure, to 257 billion dollars, whereas there was a smaller rise of that in Europe and Asia, to 131 billion and 110 billion respectively. Publishing continued to be the most preferable form of entertainment in America and Europe, with approximately 220 billion dollars in America and 50 billion for the later. Meanwhile, most of Asian people’s recreation spending went on television, at nearly 50 billion dollars, followed by the leisure cost for publishing, of around 40 billion. The amount of money spent on music, video and cinema in all three areas was well under 30 billion dollars.</span><br>
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- The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below write at least 150 words 42
- The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five-year period. write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below. write at least 150 words. 56
- The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five-year period. 84
- The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five-year period. write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below. write at least 150 words. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 741, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...three areas over the period of 5 years. Also United States always topped the chart w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, third, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2507.0 965.302439024 260% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 378.0 196.424390244 192% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.63227513228 4.92477711251 135% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.31433142797 2.65546596893 162% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404761904762 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 283.868780488 236% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 47.0 22.4926829268 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 254.833738691 43.030603864 592% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 313.375 112.824112599 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.25 22.9334400587 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0474267791309 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398881623855 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167988555984 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474267791309 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 13.2329268293 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.85 61.2550243902 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.3012195122 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 22.06 11.4140731707 193% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.4329268293 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.9970731707 189% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.0658536585 217% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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