the graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over five years. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the amount of money that people spent on entertainment such as television, publishing, music, video, and cinema in three continents namely Asia, Europe, and the United States during five years period from 1995 to 2000. As a general trend, this amount have risen during this years in throughout the world and television was the most popular hobby in all time and countries.
obviously, television is the most popular in all time and countries. In 1995, people in Asia, Europe, and the united state have spent 25, 30, and 50 billion dollars in order to watching television that reach to 45, 50, and 100 million $ in 2000, and Asia take second place after the united states. The budget that spent in publishing is a considerable amount of whole spending. In 1995, the figure of spending in publishing constitutes 30, 30, and 75 billion $ in Asia, Europe, and the united states in order that have risen to 30, 35, 110 billion $ in 2000. Overally, All money that people spent for their hobby in the united states that is 184 billion $ make up near the third time more than in Asia (67 million $) and two time (97 billion $) in Europe in 1995.
In 2000, this amount has surged to 110 billion $ in Asia that is nearly of this figure in Europe with 131 billion $ that is approximately half of the united states with 257 billion $.
In conclusion, united states people spend more money in comparison to people in the world in all this time. Moreover, this country experienced a high rise during this period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...pular hobby in all time and countries. obviously, television is the most popular in all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, second, so, third, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70833333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43456131248 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.482926829268 1657% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8931337064 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.081771479079 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390357285111 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482669632642 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574503806931 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557569885997 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.