The graph below shows how much money a city council gave to book clubs over a four-year period.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

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The graph below shows how much money a city council gave to book clubs over a four-year period.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph depicts the amount of money that a city council gave to book clubs, and the numbers of book club over four years as 5000€ intervals and 5000 books. At first glance, it notable that clubs number followed the upward pattern even though the decrease amount of money that was given by the city council.

Diving into the data in more detail, between years one and two, the amount of money increased slightly from 20,000€ to 25,000€. This amount rose sharply in the year three to reach the peak about 40,000€. Then, it fell down again by 1,000€ at the end period to follow downward pattern. However, during the first two years, the number of people of book club decreased slowly by 1,000 from 6,000 to 5,000. After that, it went up dramatically during the next two years to peak at about 12000 members in the last year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '€5000'.
Suggestion: €5000
...numbers of book club over four years as 5000€ intervals and 5000 books. At first glan...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n years one and two, the amount of money increased slightly from 20,000€ to 25,00...
^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '€000'.
Suggestion: €000
...nt of money increased slightly from 20,000€ to 25,000€. This amount rose sharply in...
^^^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '€000'.
Suggestion: €000
... increased slightly from 20,000€ to 25,000€. This amount rose sharply in the year t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '€000'.
Suggestion: €000
...e year three to reach the peak about 40,000€. Then, it fell down again by 1,000€ at ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '€000'.
Suggestion: €000
... 40,000€. Then, it fell down again by 1,000€ at the end period to follow downward pa...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07585056195 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1729707398 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180266611742 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871871972783 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07386196816 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163483046943 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814485319811 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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