The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph give information about the number of books read by men and women from 2011 to 2014 at Burnaby Public Library.
First, in 2011 women read more than men - just over 4 000 books. Until 2013, there was an upward trend and they reached 10 000 books read for women, but after that the trend became downward and in 2014 women reached around 8 000 books read.
In 2011 men started with around 3 000 books, which was lower with approximately 1 000 books read from women. Until 2012 they went up slightly but then there was significant rise to 10 000 books read. From 2013 to 2014 men reache...
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