The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The line graph presents the discrepancies between three types of enquiries that The Tourism Information Office had gained in the first-6-month in 2011.

Overall, it is inherent that whereas the number of questions sent via an email or letter had decreased, other ways of giving enquires had been growing.

Looking in the graph for more details, in January, the figure of personal enquiries was the lowest one being approximately 400. In addition, emails and calls were more favorable than another being about 800 and 900 respectively. Until the end of April, giving enquiries in person had not only risen significantly but also peaked at 1300 being the highest number. On the other hand, did two rests of methods fluctuate slightly. While making calls had gone up by 200, another one had reduced nearly 600.

Moreover, from April to June, personal and called inquiries had been believed to be more favorable than emails or letters. Whereas sending emails or letters as well had gone down from nearly 600 to 400 after May and remained the same figure by June, the number of enquiries received in person and by telephone had soared dramatically and achieved at approximately 1900 and 1600 in turn.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.025 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64835326193 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9304835651 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135715617198 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598586076395 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706154658535 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100136520458 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795847204593 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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