The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how can people reach out to a tourist bureau in a city through a half year in 2011.
At a glimpse of the chart, there are three kinds of methods that people had used those in 2011 and they are divided into 3 types: face to face, sending a letter or email and phoning.
In the beginning of 2011 on January, telephone communication was the highest preference that could make to the Tourist Information Office, but after 6 months, it ranked the second on among the choices. Surprisingly, the number of people who require the information in person increased from just under 500 to around 1900 in 2011, a rise of about 1400 during the period.
Curiously enough, either sending a letter or an email reduced no less than twice. Furthermore, April to May showed dramatically a decrease compared to by telephone because it seemed an increment about 2 times.
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- You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter, describe the item, explain where and when you left it and say what action you would like the company to take. 73
- have borrowed 11
- There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved- Describe the complaints that have been made- Say why the reception area is i 56
- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experi 84
- Write letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with him/her-How you will keep contact with him/her 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74675324675 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68002518598 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694805194805 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0109112811 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143152104952 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618323190143 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490137097621 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725666772099 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621850590527 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.