Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Dear Sir,
My name is MJ Yang and I am currently working as a full-time fashion stylist in a LG fashion in the middle of Gang-nam. I am writing this letter regards to computer course your institution is offering every summer semester. I am really interested in computer programming, but I have not qualified of new middle level course.
I studied Fashion and art. After graduation, I have worked as fancy MD(Some people called stylist). Due to my dedication and continuous learning attitude, I promoted as fast as I can, compared with my around ages in the company. Even though I did not obtain qualification of primary computing, but due to my keen interest in computers, I made myself capable of operating a computer. As computer knowledge is very useful part of any businesses. I did educate myself in different areas, such as Microsoft Word, Excel, and Outlook for emails. Being a manager, I have to use computers to perform various functions at work for sending emails to clients, making monthly employee work reports, creating time sheets templates, etc.
When I read the elementary level course curriculum, I realized that I already have the skills and knowledge that is going to be taught in the course. Also, I am ready to give a mock exam, if you want to check my basic level knowledge of computers. So, I will really appreciate if you can waive the elementary course requirement for me and grant me permission to enroll in the new course in January 2019.
I am looking forward your positive response.
Best regards,
MJ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ualified of new middle level course. I studied Fashion and art. After graduati...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...myself capable of operating a computer. As computer knowledge is very useful part ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85984848485 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82635412908 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0520088608 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5333333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254828240991 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700079747892 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684195414889 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12393604926 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865275125479 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.