The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph gives information about how many tourists pay a visit to a certain Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, the total number of tourists traveling to the Caribbean island witnessed a considerable growth over 7 years, while the figure for visitors staying on cruise ships was lower than that for visitors staying in island for the most of the period.
In 2010, there are 0,25 million of people choosing cruise ships, which is one third the number of those who stayed on island. Over the following 2 years, after increasing to 0.5 million people, the number of visitors opting for cruise ships dropped to hit its lowest point of 0,25 million people. In contrast, the figure for visitors staying on island grew considerable to 1.25 million people, therefore the total number also increased to 1,5 million people. From 2012 to 2017, the number of travelers choosing cruise ships witnessed a dramatic change to reach a peak of 2 million people, while the data of those who chose to stay on island fluctuated and finally stood at 1.5 million in 2017. The total number for both two types peaked at 3.5 million at the end of the period shown.
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- The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to cruise'
Suggestion: to cruise
...ere are 0,25 million of people choosing cruise ships, which is one third the number of...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to cruise'
Suggestion: to cruise
... 2017, the number of travelers choosing cruise ships witnessed a dramatic change to re...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, therefore, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76616915423 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36161770555 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6717786565 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.857142857 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214191831329 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121700324098 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978655410245 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204030264966 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086971688365 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.