The line graph breaks down data on visitors of Caribbean island over a period of 7 years. It is unmistakable that there was a reducing trend for total visitors and visitors who staying on cruise ships, despite a slightly climbing figures for visitors who staying on Island.
On the areas of total visitors and visitors who staying on cruise ships, one sees a trend of surge. The pattern was first demonstrated by total visitors, which experience a major increase to 3.5 millions people in 2017, a gains of 2.5 million people. Matters developed in similar way for visitors who staying on cruise ship, as this area had decisively growed to 2 millions people from 2010.
There was a different course of events for numbers of visitors who staying on island because of the fact that these area marginally gained. One sees an increasing trend in a period of 2010-2014 as shown by growth to the 1.5 millions people by 2014. There was a fluctuation in regards to a period of 2015-2017, which totaled a recovery to 1.5 millions people between 2015 and 2017.
- The chart shows the percentage of males and females who were overweight in Australia from 1980 to 2010
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without buying 56
- The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes
- The internet has greatly increased our access to information To what extent do you think this is a good thing Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- Summarize the information given in bar chart 10
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rge. The pattern was first demonstrated by total visitors, which experience a ma...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a gain' or simply 'gains'?
Suggestion: a gain; gains
...ncrease to 3.5 millions people in 2017, a gains of 2.5 million people. Matters develop...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...mbers of visitors who staying on island because of the fact that these area marginally gained. One sees...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...ying on island because of the fact that these area marginally gained. One sees an increas...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...eople by 2014. There was a fluctuation in regards to a period of 2015-2017, which totaled a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77595628415 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58070486966 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6312766044 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0782334890916 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436277960863 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343013088838 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615330684893 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277948139752 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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