The following line graph illustrates the visitor flow of one particular Caribbean island from 2010-2017. The report serves to analyse and compare the visiting pattern and number of tourists.
In general the number of visitors experienced a surge from 2010-2017, at the beginning only 1 million of visitors recorded, and the amount thrived to 3.5 millions in 2017.
When it comes to the visiting pattern, more people opt to stay on island compared with those who stay on cruise ships in 2010. Amount of visitors who decided to stay on island rose steadily from 2011 to 2013, while it levels off and remain in stagnation until 2015, it is then declined slightly. On the other hand, the amount of visitors choosing to stay on cruise drop little in 2011, it then surged in a stable pace from 2012 to 2017, and the number for the first time surpassed those who decide to stay on island in 2015.
All in all, there is increasing tourists choosing Carribean as their destination. Yet, more and more people would rather stay on cruise ship than visiting the island.
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The graph provides…
The graph provides information about the number of travelers touring off a specific Caribbean island between 7 years from 2010 and 2017. Units are measured in millions.
Overall, visitors staying on island is higher in record than travelers staying on cruise ships. However, visitors on island represented a plateau with 1.5 million visitors from year 2013 to 2015 and then a sudden fluctuation to the number of visitors, remaining steady in year 2017 at exactly 1.5 million visitors. Therefore, visitors staying on cruise ship showed a peak in 2011 with a number of 0.5 million visitors and then a fall in number of visits made by tourists in 2012, following a gradual rise in their number from 2013 to 2017 with (0.5 million and 2 million respectively).
Furthermore, an intersection is seen in the middle of 2015 between visitors staying on cruise ship and visitors staying on island by 1.4 million visitors. In total as displayed in the graph the number of tourists rose from 2010 till 2015, afterwards a slight decline is observed in year 2016. However, the number of visitors escalated between year 2016 and 2017 dramatically.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76630434783 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43162037467 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9460646598 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.625 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177937919088 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890181877626 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058709667452 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127990269389 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810119512746 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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