the graph below shows the number of visits of two music sites on the web.
write a report for a university lecturer describing the information showb below.
The given line graph illustrates the comparison in the number of visits of two music websites namely, Music Choice and Pop Parade in a matter of fifteen days. Overall, Pop Parade lead the competition between the two sites. In addition, both websites experienced fluctuation in the given period.
Looking closer at the rates, from day 1, Pop Parade garnered almost 120,000 page visitors, whereas Music Choice started at just about 40,000 visits. On day 2 and day 4, Music Choice dropped at its lowest with just under 20,000 page guests while Pop Parade plummeted at approximately 30,000 views on day 7.
Both websites rocketed on the second week. Pop Parade earned over 100,000 fan visits in from day 9 to day 11, while Music Choice gained slightly below 100,00 visits on from day 11 to day 12.
As both music pages continued to fluctuate days after skyrocketing, their end result varied. Pop parade significantly increased and finished off with above 160,000 visits. In contrast, Music Choice fell at around 70,000 page viewers in the final day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01704545455 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47950665539 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8450713944 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974726354027 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425344146273 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532242895615 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705836449905 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442644626443 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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