WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows howthese causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The supplied table illustrates the percentage of lands degraded in three regions of the earth by three major causes namely, deforestation, over-cultivation, and over-grazing in the 1990’s, while the pie chart depicts how much these causes brought such land degradation.
Overall, it can be seen that European lands has been affected the most with 9.8 percent of lands deforested, 7.7 percent over-cultivated lands, and 5.5 lands over-grazed, amounting to 23 percent of lands degraded, whereas in the pie chart, over-grazing at 35 percent, was the major cause of land degradation.
Oceania stood next to Europe with an overall 13 percent lands affected, with shockingly the highest of lands over-grazed at 11.3 percent, 1.7 lands deforested but no over-cultivation happened in its lands. The North America accumulated a minimal of 5 percent in total of its lands degraded with only 0.2 percent lands deforested, 3.3 percent over-cultivated land, and 1.5 over-grazed lands.
Over-cultivation at 35 percent, followed as the second highest cause of lands degradation, deforestation at only 27 percent, leaving other causes of land degradation at only 7 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55865921788 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41920436059 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59217877095 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7385455054 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.0 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104589056307 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768845479513 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414701688083 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865933899747 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410820727423 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.