The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The line graph compares the number of people who live in India and China in the course of 50 years from 2000 to 2050.

Overall, while there is a spectacular increasing trend in India, the number of population in China is predicted to fluctuating increase.

Look at the chart provided for more information, we can see that the figure of citizens in China accounted for 1,250 billion people, which was 250 billion higher than that of people in India. In 2010, China and India witnessed an increase to 1380 billion and 1180 billion people respectively.

Since 2020 onwards, population in China is estimated to reach its peak at 1,450 billion people in 2040, then it is anticipated that there would be a slight fluctuation to 1,400 billion at the end of surveyed period in 2050. In the meantime, population in India is foreseen to hit its peak at 1,600 billion people in 2050 after having an equal number of people compared to that in China in 2030, at 1450 billion residents.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...1,450 billion people in 2040, then it is anticipated that there would be a slight...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74269005848 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57933852837 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5463744136 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251378018357 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140113907731 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533514539355 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170046143188 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419090977934 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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