The graph below shows the power generation capacity in Germany from 2008 to 2014

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The graph below shows the power generation capacity in Germany from 2008 to 2014

The line graph compares five different sources regarding electricity production that the German government opted for during a period of 6 years, commencing from 2008. Units are measured in gigawatts.
In general, there was an upward tendency in renewable sources, namely wind and solar, while the opposite was true to non-renewable energy such as nuclear power, coal and oil. In addition, coal predominated for the first two years in which wind power replaced as the main sources for power production.
Starting at around 5 in 2008, the figure of energy generated by solar soared eightfold in 2012, and then continuously rose gradually to nearly 50 in the final year. Similarly, before increasing significantly from a slight 30 in 2012 to nearly 55 at the end of the period, with a surge by 20 between 2011 and 2012, electricity produced by wind power began at over 10 in the initial year..
Coal commenced at 30 as Germany preferred source of power, followed by nuclear power at 20 and oil at roughly 5. They stabilized over a period from 2008 to 2010 before dropping insignificantly to 20, 10 and 5 respectively in the last year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...wer began at over 10 in the initial year.. Coal commenced at 30 as Germany prefer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, similarly, so, then, while, in addition, in general, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89119170984 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86902565744 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626943005181 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4414852478 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17655668453 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715468919136 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377745891783 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105359342994 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282552047531 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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