The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The chart below gives information about the percentage of old age group (65 or over years old) in three countries around the world in one hundred years between 1940 and 2040.
Overall, we can notice that this group is getting bigger, and it is estimated to grow significantly in the next years.
It can be observed from the graph that Sweden and America have similar patterns, in 1940 the percentage of senior group was below 10% in both countries, before it increased fairly to about 15% in 1980, in addition, since the beginning of the new century Sweden has risen slightly to 20%, America, in contrast have managed to maintain this group at the same level, however, it is expected that one in four people will be aged 65 years or over in 2040.
In the other hand, Japan succeeded in keeping the old age group at the same level until 2000 when the group have started a slight grow to reach 7.5% by now, and it is clear that japan will have the same fate as America and Sweden and even worse in 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 965.302439024 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 7.49425287356 4.92477711251 152% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.47414369307 2.65546596893 357% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 283.868780488 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 261.0 22.4926829268 1160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1956.0 112.824112599 1734% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 261.0 22.9334400587 1138% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 41.0 5.23603664747 783% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704666611795 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704666611795 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704666611795 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 144.3 13.2329268293 1090% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -227.28 61.2550243902 -371% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 109.8 10.3012195122 1066% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 27.64 11.4140731707 242% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.51 8.06136585366 254% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 68.0 11.4329268293 595% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 106.4 10.9970731707 968% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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