The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph depict the percentage of the population ,who were in the 65 and the above age group over 80 years ,starting from the 1940 to 2020 ,and shows a future projection of next 20 years in the three different nations.
overall it can be seen that the proportion of the people ,who aged 65 and more rose from 1940 to present ,and this figure are expected to rise significantly even more over the next 20 years in all three countries.
Looking at the line chart ,it clear that the percentage of the USA population ,who were in the 65 and over age group grew from the 10% in 1940 to 15% in 2020. Although, this figure will be increased to 23% in 2040, similarly, the proportion of the Sweden people who aged 65 and over stood at 7% in the beginning of the period ,This proportion increased dramatically and reached 19% to in 2020,however, this figure will grow even more and will reach 25% in 2040.
Moving on to the remaining data set ,it can clearly be seen that 5% of Japan population aged 65 and more in 1940. This figure climbed to 7% in 2020 ,which was the lowest population among all three countries .This figure proportion will rise up to 20% over the next 20 years and will become a highest in all three Nations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, similarly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41484716157 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40188169529 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46288209607 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4170827375 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.5 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1666666667 22.9334400587 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337513969793 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182475826216 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559323773561 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225324111885 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385419112176 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.89 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.