The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph compares the percentage of the population who is 65 years old and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden, and USA. Overall, it is clear that the percentage of the old generation in the three countries is expected to present an essential increase in the future as a whole and Japan is estimated to be the biggest aging society.
In 1940, USA, with almost 10% old people, had the largest old population, followed by Sweden at about 7%. Japan owned the smallest percentage of senior, at 5%.
Over the period of a century(from 1940 to 2040), the percentage of old American population is predicted to increase, with rising to 15% in 1980, then remaining stable until 2017, and finally jumping to about 23% in 2040. The similar trend could also be seen in proportion in Sweden, but it is expected to increase more obviously, overtaking that in America in 1995, finally reaching 25% in 2040. The ten decades will witness a sharp increase in old Japanese population, with first leveling off at 5% until 2005, and then ballooning to the highest point at almost 27% in 2040 after overtaking the figures for American and Swedish seniors in the same year (2030).
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69268292683 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57357643317 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575609756098 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.590000468 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.428571429 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177574703872 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844532107882 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819588167313 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118443420894 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732033602111 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.