The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates and compares the elderly ratio of three nations in three different continents. Giving a demonstration in a period of a century, this graph is also features a short-term prediction.
Overall trends demonstrate an increasing rate over a century. Although Japan had the lowest proportion of elderly people, it will have the highest proportion among other specified nations.
In 1940, the people aged 65 and above formed below 10% of the total population in their own country. Ratios were about 9, 7 and 5% for USA, Sweden and Japan, respectively. The trends remained the same until 1996, where Sweden overtook USA and achieved the highest proportion of elderly people among the surveyed countries. From 1996 until now, Sweden had the highest fraction of the aged people. Until 2028, a steady trend will govern the proportion.
Based on the prediction, we expect to observe an abrupt increase in Japan’s proportion between 2028 and 2033, where its trends will overtake the USA’s in 2030 and Sweden’s in 2033. By 2040, more than a quarter of Japan’s and nearly 25% of Sweden’s society will be aged 65 and above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20105820106 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87061296612 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8690003647 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151110904657 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557363979495 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448546433582 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859411498584 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196337683832 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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